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PostSubject: What About This Poetry?   What About This Poetry? I_icon_minitimeThu Mar 05, 2009 1:59 pm

pada bias temaram lampu kota
aku berjalan tidak dengan mata
kutapaki penuh dengan segenap jiwa
apa-apa yang kurasa tak bersenyawa

keram..
buram..
legam..

segala ingin ku arti
apa sebab suatu abdi

...............

hilang terbuang makna pada pertengahan
pulang tak membawa satu persembahan

pada bias lampu temaram kota
aku datang membawa cerita

dan tau,
tiada satu dapat kuungkap
sebelum hilang satu ratap
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PostSubject: Re: What About This Poetry?   What About This Poetry? I_icon_minitimeThu Mar 05, 2009 2:01 pm

apa judul yang pas untuk puisi ini?
Bagaimana menurut Anda? wkwkwkwkwk
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PostSubject: Re: What About This Poetry?   What About This Poetry? I_icon_minitimeThu Mar 05, 2009 4:23 pm

puisi yang aneh..
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PostSubject: Re: What About This Poetry?   What About This Poetry? I_icon_minitimeSat Mar 07, 2009 11:14 pm

Buta

kan semua terlihat gelap bagi sang penulis
dan hanya bisa merasakan cahaya lampu

hehehehe
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PostSubject: Re: What About This Poetry?   What About This Poetry? I_icon_minitimeWed Mar 11, 2009 6:16 pm

buta? wah kurang mengena ini... wkwkwkwkwk
coba dipahami lagi lebih seksama...
ada banyak makna yang terkandung di dalamnya ini... wkwkwkwkwkwk
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